My Impression on the International day.
Internation day buited when on 8 December 2010 at Nakho Phathom Rajabhat University. My Impression on the International day are in this day of morning, I dress Nation of Philipine. I felt very shy because I must spoke on statspoke present about flower dance, Ako song. And I took a photo with friends and teachers. And, In afternoon I'm an organizer for competed Mr. and Ms. and this is I like view because, I saw show and ability of each people.
I thought I happy and I like International day.
Hi..Patzee
ตอบลบI understand you naja! but I think you please check word spelling.That day I like your dress of philipine naja so beautiful girl.
Hi beauty Filipino.
ตอบลบI know what you write but some words not clear such as "buited". You can check the words " Nakho Phathom" = Nakhon Pathom. Bye bye
Dear Patty,
ตอบลบI felt happy when seeing your writing about your happiness in the International Day 2010. In that day, you looked beautiful because I never saw you in this costume. So beautiful indeed! I also was proud of you when hearing your speaking to help us on the stage.
In turn, talking about your writing, there are still some mistakes happened on your task. For example, " Internation day buited when on 8 December 2010 at Nakho Phathom Rajabhat University." should be " Internation day was arranged on 8 December 2010 at Nakhon Phathom Rajabhat University."
Or "My Impression on the International day are in this day of morning, I dress Nation of Philipine." should be "My Impression on the International day was, in the morning, I dressed the National costume of Filipinos."
Next time should make a correction checking before publishing it for us. And, please make it longer for the audience too.
I know i can do it for us. ^^
My frined, plaese check grammar and tenes and
ตอบลบSomewords too. I understand that you wrote
but ...plaese check...